Huh...there shouldn't be an early end in there. The 1st part is very linear. There is a placeholder for staying male at the gym but that should be the only one. So at the end of the train in art class it just ends? I will check out why that is.
I think my Brain just melted and is seeking something ... IDK. Whomever likes this game all poweer to them . Great Job in Making the game , evn thogh its .... to much maybe . Not bad .by all means i coulnt do that , just ... too much for my brain to handle
Wow. So despite some reservations I went ahead and gave this a try and I am very happy I did. There are many parts that are not to my taste (I'm not really in to M/F sex), but even parts that weren't what I usually like were still pretty hot and enjoyable (and the occasional lesbian side action was appreciated), very little of it was actually unpleasant. Did have some issues, primarily the sex dungeon (doing it without skipping anything is way too long, and there's some glitches and it's possible to soft-lock), also wish there were more choices (especially choices about the MCs form). But regardless, it was very fun and engrossing and hot, and I'm glad I gave it a chance.
I am glad you are liking it :) You need to try the next part and elseworld. I just released a new version of the main game
I have to go back and fix the dungeon. I know the sex chair has some bugs(maybe other areas) Also, I think like a hands free mode would be good. And maybe reduced the requirements to advance.
Don't worry it happens soon and often. The sorta was there because you retain both parts and can retract your penis :). So you can really be both but there will never be sex with a man. I am just not into that kind of thing. But that does not mean that toys can't be involved. Or sex with other Futa woman.
If you are into Futa like I am you will be very happy.
Yo dude, you got a Patreon or something? I kinda wanna support your work, longterm. Or maybe you didn't plan to do this long term. I can at least say from my perspective, that you set a bar with the games you put out, so far.
1. I am convinced this game is made to play when you are on drugs. Like wowo. ;-)
2. Friendly criticism based on little experience with these games:
The penis is too big and very funky looking in both this game and Elseworld. Why does every visual novel have big penises?I would think people would want to see more female butt and vagina rather than penis or the man's face for that matter. The futa/unisex models are fine but even they have big penises in most VNs. But that is just my perspective.
Obviously, if sex is happening you can't hide everything. But definitely more focus on the girls would have been nice.
This game did have more better girl views than Elseworld but this game is lesser quality as far as the models go and cartoony look. But again that is my perspective.
3. How do you do the animations in your games? Is it build into the engine or do you have to create the animations from scratch?
Thanks for your time. Ciao. :)
I just made it to the Xenny scene. Nice angle.
Riley pole dance was nice. You could have possibly made that a high resolution 4:3 aspect ratio and made a higher quality video with closer zoom I think. There was a lot of wasted space on the left and right during the dance. Just an observation.
The gym part was interesting. Just a directing suggestion: You could have zoomed in on some of the girl's vaginas during the scenes as it played out. Some close ups. The few that you had were meh. :)
Yea this is my first visual novel and it has some rough parts in the beginning. I hope to go back and redo it. All the animations are in the engine but there is no way to use the engine to make any game I want. I have to render out the videos from the engine in a scene editor. Man it would be amazing if it was the engine you were playing in. Maybe someday they will make it like that. Most visual novels are similar though but most render out stills with some animations. I just render out all animations. I do focus more on close ups in part two. I will keep it in mind though for future renderings. I really love feedback like this. Some people play and never say a word which is fine too. Also, I will try adding in sex sounds. It’s a bit hard to sync up with the speed but I know it would add a lot. I have some in the game folder and have tried it but wasn’t sure I liked it. I will make it optional.
Cool thanks for sharing. I know it is a lot of work. I bought Part 2.
On to my thoughts again:
The Dungeon /thumbs up for the 2 dominatrix scenes. The toys were fine too but I was getting an error at the chair saying can't find picture or something when I went in a certain viewing direction. I did get through the section through finally. The dildo machine and horse were the best. Anal and dildo on the chair was the best for viewing.
Zory was hot. It would have been cool to see more of her and her parts. Great job on her.
When I tried to name the merged character the game threw another error up and I could not name it. I am guessing that is the end of part 1 or it is broke there?
I really like how you have the characters look at the camera when they are solo. That is a great touch. They make eye contact with the player. Very immersive.
Another pole dance idea: Have a spotlight on the character with a strong shadow in the background so it looks like it is mimicking the movements of the character pole dancing. Which it is since it's a shadow. :)
Lastly, is this game related to Elseworld? Or is Elseworld a spinoff?
Highlights: Top and Bottom. Not sure why a pic when to the top. Sorry.
Thank you for the bugs. I will go fix them. I have been thru it so many times and the dungeon is probably one of the most complex early things I have done. Yea I will try doing new zoomed in pole dance and I will definitely zoom in on more vaginas in future videos :) When I do go back and redo the beginning videos I will keep that in mind too. Wow It shouldn't be broken... Let me look into it. When you merged in the Library with Cindy?
In Part Two you will see the ties to Elseworld develop. Elseworld is not a spinoff. It is another planet but something happens that connects the two. I don't want to spoil anything.
I will try some more camera views on a poledance and more zoomed in. There is a nice one with Nym in the beginning of part two.
There are some really good Dom scenes in part two!
Elseworld will always be a more subdued vs MLH. I want at least one to not be banned from Steam :) The won't allow MLH.
Yeah, I think after screwing Zory there is some chat and then maybe another sex scene then you have to merge. That is where it kept failing every time I entered a name.
Update your game and you should be able to keep going on Day One. Sorry about that bug but also thank you sooooo much for pointing out the problem. I also tested the sex chair and it is pretty messed up. I can't get to the more interesting functions of the chair. Working on that but it may take a day or two. I am almost done with Elseworld V5 and want to get that out first.
Purchased the game months ago, but I cannot download it again, I have tried using my purchase link and I only get a file deleted dropbox page or redirected to itch to pay another five bucks, for just not the update but also the previous version, that I already purchased in february.
the demo almost goes to version 7. I don’t actually have a way to make version 7 again. If you send me the 1st two letters of your email and the month you bought I will send you the latest version as a one time thing.
TL;DR (fun one-handed game, but its really fun if its someone else's hand!! A few months ago my girlfriend and I were discussing if video games are a form of art, or not. ( of course they are) So realizing that her argument is as effective as a fart in a windstorm. She tells my goodnight, on her way up the stairs she turns and says " at least your not spending money on porn" Anyway I buy this game and a few other like it to see what happens. The next morning after she leaves for work I rearrange my home screen too look as i forgot to close a secret folder. When i get home that afternoon as I get to the door i started to regret that I didn't grab a trashcan lid for a shield. I reach for the door slowly trying to prepare for the opening salvo of random household artillery. I grab the door, pull. Locked, panic sets in and I'm sure she is so mad that she's locked me out of our house. my key still works, open up wait for the 5,2 mexican hell about to come for me, as long as she doesn't curse at me in spanish I still have a chance in waking up tomorrow morning,but it's quite. From downstairs I hear her tell the dog she'll take her out to pee in a few, still not sure whats about to happen I walk down stairs. She's at my desk left clicking the hell out of the mouse, so just loud enough to hear me over the headphones I say hi, whatya playing? she turns tries to look like a hardass, I almost buy it then I notice a little curl of black hair stuck to her forehead and her cheeks are pink. But me being the super genus I still haven't fully comprehended what had been going on, my brain goes the opposite direction and thinking to myself, WOW she looks really hot like that, it looks like when she is...YOU LITTLE PERV !!! She puts her head down, stands up looks at me with this grin I have never seen before in the seven years together, then in perfect form pivots on her right foot and yeets my new v2 death adder at warp speed against the wall, now I'm trying not to laugh at the dog losing her mind at the 46 new toys my 100 dollar gaming mouse just created. In the midle of this confusion she grabs my ear and blows a fart in my face. WTF is going on. So since the little mexaperv is to embarrassed to do a review. so in her words This game is fun one-handed but its really fun if its someone else's hand...
Wow uh Amazing freaking game! I thought it was a joke that it said mostly videos. Its all videos! Pretty funny too and uh crazy to say the least. Can't wait for more!
Could you tell me like the first 3 letters of your email? I can't seem to see a link from user name to email. I have a new version and I put it on Mega to see if you can download it.
Maybe let me think about it. Definitely there will be some optional pegging. I can maybe make it optional too just in case some people don't want that. I am not 100% sure i can do it with honey select. Its kinda limited in some ways. Still way easier to use over Poser or Daz though imo. I would have to make a woman that looks as close to the Mc as possible i think. Hmm or it could be a power to switch genders. Worth a try :)
Well, that would just be amazing, but my advice would be not to gender/sex swap him. Try to keep him all natural. Perhaps some femdom play? That is always really popular.... and of course, optional if you can help it. Everybody loves options. ;)
I have a character who is a total lesbian. Not bisexual and I have an idea how gender swap could make that fun and I could work pegging(sorta) into it. :) For sure there will be some femdom play. Its hard to explain without spoiling things but this is a fantasy with real magic and there is a huge reason why there are elves in the main photo. If you have played thru 0.04 you may understand the direction.
I will try the black outlines. Yea I know it needs sound and music ( I make music so plan on adding some original stuff ). Had sound turned on for the exports with the train noise but then it cut poorly when you skipped a video. I found a way to extract sounds from unity packages to grab some HS2 sounds that I am going to try. I was having problems with Webm using OBS ( tried MKV too but it didnt seem to work in Renpy?) . I will have to try again so the file size does not get huge. I also do not like how with fast action the video looks like crap for the 1st like 3 seconds (maybe thats an AVI problem too?). I plan on re-doing those animations as I get better. As they are its like the 10th version lol. Started out with stillsl then tried transitioning from 1 still to the next but didnt like how that looked...Did some lighting tutorials too to get better. But really love how the short videos turn out but just need to optimize. I am trying to optimize work flow so I want to see if I can get Webm to work straight from OBS instead of using like you suggested with Yac. I hope it can be done. Is there something better than OBS? I like the program but I am open to better.
I added in that song you suggested but not until I release it again (V0.03). I put 3 songs for the now 3 different areas. I put the one you suggested in the 2nd area. Just seems to fit there.
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part 2 says something about a loop the first part ended on the train for me no loop mentioned
Huh..There is a lot more after the train. The train in art class?
ya but i chose the wrong choice i finished part one but still no mention of any loop.
Huh...there shouldn't be an early end in there. The 1st part is very linear. There is a placeholder for staying male at the gym but that should be the only one. So at the end of the train in art class it just ends? I will check out why that is.
I think my Brain just melted and is seeking something ... IDK. Whomever likes this game all poweer to them .
Great Job in Making the game , evn thogh its .... to much maybe . Not bad .by all means i coulnt do that , just ... too much for my brain to handle
Wow. So despite some reservations I went ahead and gave this a try and I am very happy I did. There are many parts that are not to my taste (I'm not really in to M/F sex), but even parts that weren't what I usually like were still pretty hot and enjoyable (and the occasional lesbian side action was appreciated), very little of it was actually unpleasant. Did have some issues, primarily the sex dungeon (doing it without skipping anything is way too long, and there's some glitches and it's possible to soft-lock), also wish there were more choices (especially choices about the MCs form). But regardless, it was very fun and engrossing and hot, and I'm glad I gave it a chance.
I am glad you are liking it :) You need to try the next part and elseworld. I just released a new version of the main game
I have to go back and fix the dungeon. I know the sex chair has some bugs(maybe other areas) Also, I think like a hands free mode would be good. And maybe reduced the requirements to advance.
Game is giving me an error I play on windows
The main character can "sorta" become futa? What does that mean, and when does it happen? Is there maybe a way to have it happen sooner?
Don't worry it happens soon and often. The sorta was there because you retain both parts and can retract your penis :). So you can really be both but there will never be sex with a man. I am just not into that kind of thing. But that does not mean that toys can't be involved. Or sex with other Futa woman.
If you are into Futa like I am you will be very happy.
Thanks,
Betazero
Thanks for the quick reply and happy to hear all of that.
Yo dude, you got a Patreon or something? I kinda wanna support your work, longterm. Or maybe you didn't plan to do this long term. I can at least say from my perspective, that you set a bar with the games you put out, so far.
Yea for sure it is https://www.patreon.com/beta_zero sorry that I just noticed this post. I am usually way better at responding.
Lots of action in this one. /thumbs up
Just my thoughts...
1. I am convinced this game is made to play when you are on drugs. Like wowo. ;-)
2. Friendly criticism based on little experience with these games:
The penis is too big and very funky looking in both this game and Elseworld. Why does every visual novel have big penises?I would think people would want to see more female butt and vagina rather than penis or the man's face for that matter. The futa/unisex models are fine but even they have big penises in most VNs. But that is just my perspective.
Obviously, if sex is happening you can't hide everything. But definitely more focus on the girls would have been nice.
This game did have more better girl views than Elseworld but this game is lesser quality as far as the models go and cartoony look. But again that is my perspective.
3. How do you do the animations in your games? Is it build into the engine or do you have to create the animations from scratch?
Thanks for your time. Ciao. :)
I just made it to the Xenny scene. Nice angle.
Riley pole dance was nice. You could have possibly made that a high resolution 4:3 aspect ratio and made a higher quality video with closer zoom I think. There was a lot of wasted space on the left and right during the dance. Just an observation.
The gym part was interesting. Just a directing suggestion: You could have zoomed in on some of the girl's vaginas during the scenes as it played out. Some close ups. The few that you had were meh. :)
Yea this is my first visual novel and it has some rough parts in the beginning. I hope to go back and redo it. All the animations are in the engine but there is no way to use the engine to make any game I want. I have to render out the videos from the engine in a scene editor. Man it would be amazing if it was the engine you were playing in. Maybe someday they will make it like that. Most visual novels are similar though but most render out stills with some animations. I just render out all animations. I do focus more on close ups in part two. I will keep it in mind though for future renderings. I really love feedback like this. Some people play and never say a word which is fine too. Also, I will try adding in sex sounds. It’s a bit hard to sync up with the speed but I know it would add a lot. I have some in the game folder and have tried it but wasn’t sure I liked it. I will make it optional.
On to my thoughts again:
The Dungeon /thumbs up for the 2 dominatrix scenes. The toys were fine too but I was getting an error at the chair saying can't find picture or something when I went in a certain viewing direction. I did get through the section through finally. The dildo machine and horse were the best. Anal and dildo on the chair was the best for viewing.
Zory was hot. It would have been cool to see more of her and her parts. Great job on her.
When I tried to name the merged character the game threw another error up and I could not name it. I am guessing that is the end of part 1 or it is broke there?
I really like how you have the characters look at the camera when they are solo. That is a great touch. They make eye contact with the player. Very immersive.
Another pole dance idea: Have a spotlight on the character with a strong shadow in the background so it looks like it is mimicking the movements of the character pole dancing. Which it is since it's a shadow. :)
Lastly, is this game related to Elseworld? Or is Elseworld a spinoff?
Highlights: Top and Bottom. Not sure why a pic when to the top. Sorry.
Thank you for the bugs. I will go fix them. I have been thru it so many times and the dungeon is probably one of the most complex early things I have done. Yea I will try doing new zoomed in pole dance and I will definitely zoom in on more vaginas in future videos :) When I do go back and redo the beginning videos I will keep that in mind too. Wow It shouldn't be broken... Let me look into it. When you merged in the Library with Cindy?
In Part Two you will see the ties to Elseworld develop. Elseworld is not a spinoff. It is another planet but something happens that connects the two. I don't want to spoil anything.
I will try some more camera views on a poledance and more zoomed in. There is a nice one with Nym in the beginning of part two.
There are some really good Dom scenes in part two!
Elseworld will always be a more subdued vs MLH. I want at least one to not be banned from Steam :) The won't allow MLH.
Yeah, I think after screwing Zory there is some chat and then maybe another sex scene then you have to merge. That is where it kept failing every time I entered a name.
Yea that is fixed now in the current version. I still need to fix the sex chair though. It does not work right.
Update your game and you should be able to keep going on Day One. Sorry about that bug but also thank you sooooo much for pointing out the problem. I also tested the sex chair and it is pretty messed up. I can't get to the more interesting functions of the chair. Working on that but it may take a day or two. I am almost done with Elseworld V5 and want to get that out first.
is there boss fights
Purchased the game months ago, but I cannot download it again, I have tried using my purchase link and I only get a file deleted dropbox page or redirected to itch to pay another five bucks, for just not the update but also the previous version, that I already purchased in february.
the demo almost goes to version 7. I don’t actually have a way to make version 7 again. If you send me the 1st two letters of your email and the month you bought I will send you the latest version as a one time thing.
ad. Purchase date feb-16-2022
TL;DR (fun one-handed game, but its really fun if its someone else's hand!! A few months ago my girlfriend and I were discussing if video games are a form of art, or not. ( of course they are) So realizing that her argument is as effective as a fart in a windstorm. She tells my goodnight, on her way up the stairs she turns and says " at least your not spending money on porn" Anyway I buy this game and a few other like it to see what happens. The next morning after she leaves for work I rearrange my home screen too look as i forgot to close a secret folder. When i get home that afternoon as I get to the door i started to regret that I didn't grab a trashcan lid for a shield. I reach for the door slowly trying to prepare for the opening salvo of random household artillery. I grab the door, pull. Locked, panic sets in and I'm sure she is so mad that she's locked me out of our house. my key still works, open up wait for the 5,2 mexican hell about to come for me, as long as she doesn't curse at me in spanish I still have a chance in waking up tomorrow morning,but it's quite. From downstairs I hear her tell the dog she'll take her out to pee in a few, still not sure whats about to happen I walk down stairs. She's at my desk left clicking the hell out of the mouse, so just loud enough to hear me over the headphones I say hi, whatya playing? she turns tries to look like a hardass, I almost buy it then I notice a little curl of black hair stuck to her forehead and her cheeks are pink. But me being the super genus I still haven't fully comprehended what had been going on, my brain goes the opposite direction and thinking to myself, WOW she looks really hot like that, it looks like when she is...YOU LITTLE PERV !!! She puts her head down, stands up looks at me with this grin I have never seen before in the seven years together, then in perfect form pivots on her right foot and yeets my new v2 death adder at warp speed against the wall, now I'm trying not to laugh at the dog losing her mind at the 46 new toys my 100 dollar gaming mouse just created. In the midle of this confusion she grabs my ear and blows a fart in my face. WTF is going on. So since the little mexaperv is to embarrassed to do a review. so in her words This game is fun one-handed but its really fun if its someone else's hand...
LOL omg thats the funniest thing ever! Hey girls are pervs too :)
downloaded on patreon. short but sweet. I'll be checking back on this in a few months. Is the core game going to have sandbox elements?
Thank you :) Yes there will be at the end of the 1st day. There is going to be some freedom in the dungeon too. The 1st day just has to be on rails.
Thanks,
Beta
Wow uh Amazing freaking game! I thought it was a joke that it said mostly videos. Its all videos! Pretty funny too and uh crazy to say the least. Can't wait for more!
Thank you :) Glad you liked it and much more to come.
I come from China,I can't download the game because of the region，o I'm hoping solve this problem or a refund，thanks
how do you normally download games? I can put the files on Mega if that works.
Give it a try, because I usually only use China's Baidu network dican try，thanks。
Could you tell me like the first 3 letters of your email? I can't seem to see a link from user name to email. I have a new version and I put it on Mega to see if you can download it.
Thanks,
Betazero
l13
Ok I sent you an email with the Mega link.
Thanks,
Beta
Ok I will try it
Is there a kink/fetish list for this game somewhere?
I added this info to home page :)
Thank you! :D
Does the MC dable in female clothes or anything like that?
Maybe let me think about it. Definitely there will be some optional pegging. I can maybe make it optional too just in case some people don't want that. I am not 100% sure i can do it with honey select. Its kinda limited in some ways. Still way easier to use over Poser or Daz though imo. I would have to make a woman that looks as close to the Mc as possible i think. Hmm or it could be a power to switch genders. Worth a try :)
Well, that would just be amazing, but my advice would be not to gender/sex swap him. Try to keep him all natural. Perhaps some femdom play? That is always really popular.... and of course, optional if you can help it. Everybody loves options. ;)
I have a character who is a total lesbian. Not bisexual and I have an idea how gender swap could make that fun and I could work pegging(sorta) into it. :) For sure there will be some femdom play. Its hard to explain without spoiling things but this is a fantasy with real magic and there is a huge reason why there are elves in the main photo. If you have played thru 0.04 you may understand the direction.
You should check out the latest version. Not going to tell you too much but I think you will be very happy :)
Downloading now. Will let you know. It's been a busy few weeks, it'll be nice to wind down a bit ;)
Good start.
Consider adding some music.
https://freemusicarchive.org/music/Jason_Shaw/Audionautix_Tech_Urban_Dance/TU-Ni...
A black outline around the text looks better than white.
https://mega.nz/file/vP4CjZjR#rxO5fgYCJ4uGcQIUuu0oNg7adXIuuH4Tq018lrL3jCE
You can check out the changes I made using https://winmerge.org
Webm and Webp would compress better then Png and Avi.
https://f95zone.to/threads/yac-yet-another-cruncher-a-game-compactor-v3-3.55421/
Thank you :)
I will try the black outlines. Yea I know it needs sound and music ( I make music so plan on adding some original stuff ). Had sound turned on for the exports with the train noise but then it cut poorly when you skipped a video. I found a way to extract sounds from unity packages to grab some HS2 sounds that I am going to try. I was having problems with Webm using OBS ( tried MKV too but it didnt seem to work in Renpy?) . I will have to try again so the file size does not get huge. I also do not like how with fast action the video looks like crap for the 1st like 3 seconds (maybe thats an AVI problem too?). I plan on re-doing those animations as I get better. As they are its like the 10th version lol. Started out with stillsl then tried transitioning from 1 still to the next but didnt like how that looked...Did some lighting tutorials too to get better. But really love how the short videos turn out but just need to optimize. I am trying to optimize work flow so I want to see if I can get Webm to work straight from OBS instead of using like you suggested with Yac. I hope it can be done. Is there something better than OBS? I like the program but I am open to better.
I added in that song you suggested but not until I release it again (V0.03). I put 3 songs for the now 3 different areas. I put the one you suggested in the 2nd area. Just seems to fit there.